AxelTheNavy's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sexy Charlotte]

Well

Honestly and admittedly, I see a slight improvement from your previous works, but you need to still practice making straight, solid lines. Also practice shading a little more in depth, and not make the pose so static-looking.
the concept is not very creative, nor is it inspiring or eye-catching. Just something someone could whip up in about an hour after staring at a "How to Draw Anime Girls" book from barne's N Noble for about 10 dollars.
Also, who the fuck would pay 10-15 bucks for something any other weaboo would draw for free?..and better!?

DragonPunch responds:

Look, I agree with your review. I do honestly have a little bit of trouble with shading. Mostly because I can't get the damn layers to work right sometimes. But, the weeaboo comment is hurtful and I demand you take it back. It is not necessary. Plus, I do know I have a lot of improvements to work on, and therefore, I am using references for difficult poses and using references to determine light sources.

[Spazkid VS The World]

"Wow how long did this take you..."

Really...

[Raphael Mario]

Species:Turtle

I reccomend you
-learn anatomy
-get a better program
-learn detail
-cure thaose pesky Parkinson's
-practice

Then you will be on your way!

[Runk-A-Chunk]

she's a bit skinny

And you missed some cellulite, but other than that it's pretty much amazing.

BizarroJoe responds:

Dunno... How much lard can the human body store before losing its anthropomorphic figure? I think I got to the borderline...
But thanks for visiting anyway, Axel!

[Pokemon]

What

Okay, either the perspective of this piece is horribly concieved, or this is supposed to be an optical illusion comprised 2 anime girls, 6 badly drawn Pokemon, and a screen-shot in the background of either Mt. Vesuvius erupting, or the 2007 Tsunami. (or was it 05?)
The characters are straight out of a "How to draw Anime" book, and the Pokemon seemed to have been drawn without any reference. I also am spotting some sort of "shadow" or "shading" under them, guessing it's an attempt at emulating depth; which I can give you credit for, but then take it away for not doing it, and doing it, and doing it well.
About the Pokemon:
-Evee seems ot have twisted "her" right ankle. (Okay, I know the leg's supposed to be turned towards the right, but it isn't shaded accordingly, so it looks twisted)

-Pikachu has a well drawn head, but the body seems to be a reject of one of those robot dogs they used to make in the late 90's

-Marreeps pretty good I guess, no real problems

-Dratini looks a bit too small, like it was badly shopped in there

-same with Sneasle, not sure what the fuck he's doing here. Looks like he's trying to do that jerk dance the black people seem to love.

-also I caught the Mew and Latios(or latias whatever) and they look REALLY out of place.

And I don't know how to conclude this so I'll say penis.
Penis.

LovelyKouga responds:

The background I hand-drew, and it's Mount Maunganui.
'How to draw anime book'? I guess I'll take that as a compliment, because, hey, guess what, my style IS anime. Duh. XD

And no I didn't use any reference, my bad!
'Mareep' is actually a Flaaffy.
'Dratini' is actually a Dragonair.
And that's horribly racist! Sneasel, she is attacking the two little Pichu's down there.

Mew and Latios are in the background.
I don't mind if you don't like the picture, as I drew it for my best friend. Those are her two fave legendaries. <3

Your comment wasn't helpful at all, you could have specified how I could improve but you know, whatever.

[Tigga' 4 Life]

Damn

You goin' places my tigga.